Local: MAN SENTENCED TO LIFE IN PRISON AFTER 2013 APPLETON NIGHT CLUB MURDER
The man convicted of fatally shooting
Joshua Richards at the former Luna Lounge in Appleton in 2013 was sentenced to
life in prison this week with the eligibility for parole after 34 years, according to NBC 26. Chong
Lee was found guilty of six charges back in march, which included first degree
intentional homicide.
According to Fox 11, Both Lee’s and Richard’s family were in the courtroom when Lee received his sentencing. WBAY reported that Lee will be first eligible for parole in 2048.
According to Fox 11, Both Lee’s and Richard’s family were in the courtroom when Lee received his sentencing. WBAY reported that Lee will be first eligible for parole in 2048.
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I chose to write this local story because it showed several newsworthy elements. First, it showed prominence as this was a very big case back in 2013 after Lee had murdered Richards and was important to follow up with his sentencing after it affected the entire community. It showed emotion as anytime somebody is murdered in the community, it comes as unexpected leaving people shocked, confused, sad and angry. The story also expressed novelty as it was the first time the victim's family was seeing any justice for their loved one when the suspect was finally sentenced. I thought it was very important to cover this story as it's a bit of comfort when a suspect is finally sentenced and justice is served after killing an innocent person and he can no longer harm anyone else when he is in jail
National: SHERIFF AND HIS WIFE FOUND SHOT TO DEATH OUTSIDE OF FAMILY HOME
I chose to write this local story because it showed several newsworthy elements. First, it showed prominence as this was a very big case back in 2013 after Lee had murdered Richards and was important to follow up with his sentencing after it affected the entire community. It showed emotion as anytime somebody is murdered in the community, it comes as unexpected leaving people shocked, confused, sad and angry. The story also expressed novelty as it was the first time the victim's family was seeing any justice for their loved one when the suspect was finally sentenced. I thought it was very important to cover this story as it's a bit of comfort when a suspect is finally sentenced and justice is served after killing an innocent person and he can no longer harm anyone else when he is in jail
National: SHERIFF AND HIS WIFE FOUND SHOT TO DEATH OUTSIDE OF FAMILY HOME
A sheriff’s deputy and his wife
were found fatally shot in the town of Emmett Township, Minnesota early this
morning after receiving the 911 call around 8:00 am. According to WoodTV8, neighbors thought to have
heard the gunshots around 1:00 am this morning, but mistakenly took the loud noise
for fireworks.
Fox 17 reported that the family’s two children were home during the time of the shots, along with two friends, who were staying the night for a sleepover.
Fox 17 reported that the family’s two children were home during the time of the shots, along with two friends, who were staying the night for a sleepover.
The Detroit Free Press also reported that the deputy who died was an 18
year member of the department however the names of the individuals have not
been released as members of the family still need to be notified.
The sheriff’s office did release
a statement to the public however, notifying them that while there is no threat
or suspected killer to be afraid of, there will be an ongoing investigation
into the cause of their deaths. They also expressed their deepest condolences
and regrets to the family.
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I briefed this story because it had nearly all of the elements of being newsworthy. First, it had immediacy because it happened earlier in the morning. It was prominent because there have been a string of police related shootings and now individuals are going to their homes to kill the officers. It had novelty because, as stated above, most police related shootings happen on the job and don't necessarily happen in their own homes or with their families. It also sparked a lot of emotion as it was the local deputy and his wife who were killed, leaving their children behind. There are a lot a questions regarding the shooting and causes a lot of shock, confusion, anger and sadness among the community and nation. I thought it was important to brief this story because it opens up the debate in regards to police officers and shootings and why so many of them are being shot and murdered in recent months and years.
International: JAPANESE BOY FOUND AFTER PARENTS ABANDON HIM IN FOREST
The Guardian reported this morning that a 7 year old Japanese boy was
found safe after parents left him in the forest to teach him a lesson. Yamato
Tanooka survived on his own for almost a week by seeking shelter in a nearby
military hut and drank water from a nearby faucet. The boy was found by pure
chance by a military personnel and was said to have only cuts on his body.
According to the Chicago Tribune, the parents originally had
reported that their son had gotten lost while on a family hiking trip but later
admitted to punishing him after he was throwing stones and cars and people. They
returned a few minutes later after leaving him but the boy was already gone.
According to ABC News, the boy has been reunited with
his family after his father repeatedly apologized to him and promised to do a
better job of parenting.
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I briefed this story because, again, it expressed many elements of being newsworthy and isn't a story you hear very often. First, it had immediacy as it happened within the last few days. It has prominence because if this was to happen in the United States, those parents would likely face jail time, but in Japan, it seems as though they are not. It also shows novelty because most parents do not punish their children by abandoning them in the forest for several days. It also sparked emotion as people all over the world chimed in to give their input to the story. A lot of these feelings included anger and disgust for the parents and sympathy for the boy. I thought it was important to cover this story because it's very interesting to see how society reacts to different situations in different countries.
I briefed this story because, again, it expressed many elements of being newsworthy and isn't a story you hear very often. First, it had immediacy as it happened within the last few days. It has prominence because if this was to happen in the United States, those parents would likely face jail time, but in Japan, it seems as though they are not. It also shows novelty because most parents do not punish their children by abandoning them in the forest for several days. It also sparked emotion as people all over the world chimed in to give their input to the story. A lot of these feelings included anger and disgust for the parents and sympathy for the boy. I thought it was important to cover this story because it's very interesting to see how society reacts to different situations in different countries.
Jessica,
ReplyDeleteWonderful choices for newsworthy stories this week. The one that stuck out to me was your National news story. It makes me sick to hear about police officers lives being taken. They daily go out to protect their community. In addition, to have his wife taken as well is not right. Having the kids and friends in the home makes me just cringe. I am thankful they are fine.
You are great at summarizing stories and keeping it factual and interesting. One suggestion I have is work on your phrasing.
Ex: "The deputy who died was an 18 year old member of the department..." Initially I read this as the man was 18 years old, and then reread it to be he has been working for the department for at years. Just consider how your word choices may be confusing for your readers. Other than that wonderful job!
Keep up the good work! I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future!
Hi Elisabeth -- thanks for the comment. It's really horrible to hear about all of these police related shootings. It made me sick to my stomach when I read this article but it will be interesting to see what the investigators find out.
DeleteLooking back at my article, I see what you mean about the wording. I will go in and fix that and make sure to note that for future briefs. Thanks!!
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ReplyDeleteI definitely like your story choices! You also kept them short and to-the-point, answering the 5 W's & H.
ReplyDeleteIn regards to continuous improvement, I suggest that you nix your work cited section and instead hyperlink--far less work for you! Also, I didn't see much if any attribution in your briefs. I only bring it up because it is important to state where the information came from (since those sources did the work in discovering that information). I don't want you to get in trouble for plagiarizing!
Looking forward to the next brief!
Thanks for the continuous improvement Breanna! For some reason, my mind thought AP and APA were the same thing and I didn't realize I was citing these stories the wrong way. I definitely agree that it is important to state where the information is coming from. I have gone back in and adjusted this. Thanks for the tip!
DeleteNo problem! I totally did the same thing when we started! I thought she just mistyped AP and it was meant to be APA. AP makes things a lot easier! It looks swell now :)
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ReplyDeleteGreat job on your stories! I can't believe your international story though! It's so gut wrenching that someone would abandon their child to "teach them a lesson." Before I read that story, I thought all of your stories were going to be about homicide. I'm glad they weren't
My only CI--possibly hyperlink the sources into your post. It makes it easier for the reader to see where the information came to and go straight to the source if they want.
Hey Sam! I totally agree -- I don't understand how any logical parent would think that is a good idea and form of 'punishment'. I was even more surprised that the authorities didn't charge the parents but that's the difference between this country and others. I have also noted your CI for me and have gone back in and changed that. Thanks for the tip!
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ReplyDeleteGreat job on everything you wrote here. I'm glad about the killer in Appleton finally receiving a sentence - it's not a story I had heard about previously, but I'm glad to see some sort of justice happening after such a long time since the event happened.
Hi Ryan -- I thought that it was important to follow up on this story even though it happened a few years ago. It's always a good thing to see what actually ends up happening in these cases as many times, it can take a few years for a sentence to be made. Thanks!
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