Local: BODY FOUND IN BELLEVUE
On Saturday, May 21st,
the body of 31 year old Nicole Vanderheyden was found in a field alongside
Hoffman Road in Bellevue, according to FOX 11. Police officers arrested Vanderheyden’s boyfriend,
Douglass Detrie, at his parents’ home last Monday on suspicion of first degree
intentional homicide, with a $1 million cash bond.
Vanderheyden, who had three
children, one of which she shared with Detrie, was found a few miles down the
road from the home she shared with Detrie.
WBAY reported that prosecutors believe the homicide
resulted from an argument the couple had earlier that day, suggesting that Detrie
then beat and strangled Vanderheyden. Prosecutors found bloodstains and dirt
outside of their home, along with the inside of Vanderheyden’s car, however
Detrie’s defense attorneys have stated that the bloodstains could be there for
multiple reasons, and are still waiting to get the test results back from those
stains.
Detrie was scheduled to appear in
court Monday and has another date schedule next week after the evidence showed
enough probable cause.
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I decided to write this story because it proved to have several elements to be considered newsworthy. First, it had immediacy because Vanderheyden's body was found just a few days earlier. It had emotion because it caused a lot of shock, confusion, fear and anger within the local community. Many people were scared when they did not have a suspect in custody and many were beyond angry that someone could take the life of an individual. The story also was prominent in that murders are a pretty rare occurrence in the community and the situation itself left an innocent person dead. It also had novelty as no one expected that there would be a murder in the Green Bay community, and left everyone shocked and confused. I think it was important to discuss this brief as the community needed to be aware of what was going on with such an important issue in their town.
National: GORILLA SHOT AFTER YOUNG BOY FALLS IN EXHIBIT
According to CBS News, A 17-year-old gorilla named
Harambe was shot dead after a young boy fell into the exhibit early Sunday
morning at the Cincinnati Zoo. A visitor’s video of the event went viral,
causing much outrage and blame being pointed at the boy’s mother, who was said
to have been watching many other children at the time the boy fell into the
exhibit.
The gorilla was said to be
nudging and dragging the small boy, however the zoo said the boy was never
under attack but definitely at risk. According to CNN, the Zoo initiated their animal response
team in what they believed was a life-threatening situation, which involved
shooting the endangered animal.
Many fingers are being pointed at
the boy’s mother, claiming her negligence cause an endangered animal to be
killed. NBC News reported that animals rights groups such as PETA said that multiple barriers should
have been put around the gorilla’s exhibit for better preventative measures.
The boy was taken Cincinnati
Children’s Hospital Medical center and was said to have serious initial
injuries.
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I chose to brief this story because it also expressed many of the newsworthy characteristics and was a very unusual story to hear about. The story had immediacy as the boy fell into the exhibit earlier that morning. It showed emotion as millions of people went to their social media accounts to express thier feelings, anger, disgust and sympathy for the gorilla and for the family. It also was prominent because it sparked a nation wide debate whether or not the life should have been taken of an innocent animal whose cage the boy fell into. People were pointing fingers at both the zoo, and some at the family. The story also showed novelty because this was a very rare occurance for the zoo and the shock that people felt all over the nation, watching the video footage of the gorilla handling the boy sparked a lot of outrage and sympathy. I think it was important to discuss this article because it did cause a nationwide debate in regards to animals rights and groups such as PETA.
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I chose to brief this story because it also expressed many of the newsworthy characteristics and was a very unusual story to hear about. The story had immediacy as the boy fell into the exhibit earlier that morning. It showed emotion as millions of people went to their social media accounts to express thier feelings, anger, disgust and sympathy for the gorilla and for the family. It also was prominent because it sparked a nation wide debate whether or not the life should have been taken of an innocent animal whose cage the boy fell into. People were pointing fingers at both the zoo, and some at the family. The story also showed novelty because this was a very rare occurance for the zoo and the shock that people felt all over the nation, watching the video footage of the gorilla handling the boy sparked a lot of outrage and sympathy. I think it was important to discuss this article because it did cause a nationwide debate in regards to animals rights and groups such as PETA.
International: PRESIDENT OBAMA VISITS VIETNAM IN HOPES TO AMEND PAST TIES
According to PRI., President Obama was in Vietnam,
Japan this last week, in efforts to amend past ties between the two countries. According to the Washington Post, Obama, who is reported to be only the third president to visit the country,
lifted the 50 year ban on the sales of weapons to their government. In doing
so, Obama hopes to better the relationship between the two countries as other
factors such as business, military, research and cultural programs hope to
strengthen.
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I decided to brief this story because it showed prominence as the history between both the United States and Vietnam is a very crucial thing in regard to both our country and Vietnam. It also expressed novelty as President Obama was only the third president in our nation's history to visit Vietnam and is truly a historical event. It also showed immediacy as the President has visited the country this past week. I thought this was also an important topic to cover because if President Obama can stregthen ties between the two nations, we can hope for more opportunities and a better relationship with the country.
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I decided to brief this story because it showed prominence as the history between both the United States and Vietnam is a very crucial thing in regard to both our country and Vietnam. It also expressed novelty as President Obama was only the third president in our nation's history to visit Vietnam and is truly a historical event. It also showed immediacy as the President has visited the country this past week. I thought this was also an important topic to cover because if President Obama can stregthen ties between the two nations, we can hope for more opportunities and a better relationship with the country.
For your local and international stories, we both touched on the same subjects, but your national news story is a good one. The incident at the zoo has several newsworthiness characteristics: there is novelty, conflict, emotions and maybe even prominence. The novelty is the attraction, the endangered animal and the child falling in. The conflict is if the animal should have been put down and the mom's responsibility. Emotions, pretty evident (look at conflict). Prominence because PETA is a national organization and many of us have been to zoos. While this wasn't in our personal backyard, this could happen at our zoo.
ReplyDeleteHi Israel, thanks for the comment! I agree that the incident at the zoo was definitely a story that was newsworthy. Even in the last week after the story came out, there has been such a wide variety of response including backlash, scrutiny and support from people all over the world. It's a sad story to write about. Thanks!
DeleteJessica- Three great stories that appeal to a wide variety of readers. Stories were cleanly written, concise, and accurate. CI-Explanations section get a bit lengthy, keep more focused which will shorten then up and induce effectiveness. Also, Keep consistency and formatting of works cited more accurate. Other than that, very fluent writer and look forward to more of your stories!
ReplyDeleteHi Alexander, thanks for your insight! I will keep that in mind in regards to the length of my explanations for future briefs that I write. Also, after I read your comment about the formatting, I too thought it should be more consistent. I'm not sure if something got misplaced when I published it, but I went back in and reformatted it. Thanks for pointing that out!
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ReplyDeleteI loved your story choices. It was easy to read with the layout you choose and you had great variety in the types of stories you picked. Additionally, you were clear and concise in your writing.
Thanks for the comment Elissa! I thought that these stories were all appropriate and newsworthy for the week -- especially my national story. The response and backlash that has happened over the last week ever since the story came out is really just remarkable. That goes to show how much social media truly affects society today. Thanks!
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